chaucer
01-14-2007, 03:39 PM
Once upon a time, in a far away land, lived King Jamul, king of the kingdom of
Hamumuopolis. He was loved by (most of) his people, and was a happy man.
He reigned together with the queen, Sol Hunt, and his the only real sadness
he had experienced in quite a long while was when Hammod, the leader of
the Mayhemic section of his the city he lived in, called Forumia, had
dissapeared without a trace or warning.
Now, a few years ago, he had banished from his city a man called Dark
Lord Batty. And one day, without warning, he receaved a letter from him.
Later that night, DLB himself showed up in the king's bedroom, knocked out
Jamul, and kidnapped the queen. King Jamul woke up in a desert, and set off
to find the queen and defeat DLB once and for all.
This is my latest RPG.
I am not asking for anything but comments and storyline suggestions. Also, if you have a plot twist to send me, send it through a PM, so it's secret.
Hamumuopolis. He was loved by (most of) his people, and was a happy man.
He reigned together with the queen, Sol Hunt, and his the only real sadness
he had experienced in quite a long while was when Hammod, the leader of
the Mayhemic section of his the city he lived in, called Forumia, had
dissapeared without a trace or warning.
Now, a few years ago, he had banished from his city a man called Dark
Lord Batty. And one day, without warning, he receaved a letter from him.
Later that night, DLB himself showed up in the king's bedroom, knocked out
Jamul, and kidnapped the queen. King Jamul woke up in a desert, and set off
to find the queen and defeat DLB once and for all.
This is my latest RPG.
I am not asking for anything but comments and storyline suggestions. Also, if you have a plot twist to send me, send it through a PM, so it's secret.